Flesh

[dizzojay.livejournal.com]

Rating: K+
Genre: angst
Word count: approx 100 words

Something a little dark, a taster for a longer multi-chap fic which I will post here soon.

Sam sees only good in his brother ... until he turns around.

 

 

xxxxx

He would never forget that damned poltergeist job …

The intense, terrible heat of the flames beating him back from the blazing house like a roaring, leaping wild animal.

The sight of Dean, carrying the child; staggering through choking, acrid smoke, shirt on fire, soot-blackened face twisted in pain.

The smell of his brother's burning flesh; the wail of the sirens, the screams of onlookers.

Dean's breathless cries as Sam threw him to the ground, smothering the flames with his own body.

He wished he could forget; he tried to forget.

But his brother's scarred back reminded him every day.

xxxxx

end

Comments

[thruterryseyes.livejournal.com]

can't wait!

[dizzojay.livejournal.com]

hey there; I am such a dork. The longer fic is already posted to Hoodie time. it's called Burning Memories, and I think you may have already read it - I had all sorts of problems posting it!

Links: Chp 1 - 4 http://community.livejournal.com/hoodie_time/289691.html#cutid1
Chp 5 - 7 http://community.livejournal.com/hoodie_time/290740.html#cutid1
Epilogue http://community.livejournal.com/hoodie_time/290740.html#cutid1

Thanks for commenting - glad you liked!

[nong-pradu.livejournal.com]

Very promising beginning!

[dizzojay.livejournal.com]

Hi there; glad you enjoyed x
Links to the longer story:

Chp 1 - 4 http://community.livejournal.com/hoodie_time/289691.html#cutid1
Chp 5 - 7 http://community.livejournal.com/hoodie_time/290740.html#cutid1
Epilogue http://community.livejournal.com/hoodie_time/290740.html#cutid1

[caz2y5.livejournal.com]

awwww this was very sad

[dizzojay.livejournal.com]

Hey there, glad you enjoyed.

Links to longer story ...
Links:
Chp 1 - 4 http://community.livejournal.com/hoodie_time/289691.html#cutid1
Chp 5 - 7 http://community.livejournal.com/hoodie_time/290740.html#cutid1
Epilogue http://community.livejournal.com/hoodie_time/290740.html#cutid1

[metallidean-grl.livejournal.com]

WOW! This is cool. Can't wait for the longer post. Should be good. I'm intrigued and hooked now. Want more, I know, I'm greedy.

[dizzojay.livejournal.com]

Hi there. Thanks for commenting, glad you enjoyed.

Links to longer story ...
Chp 1 - 4 http://community.livejournal.com/hoodie_time/289691.html#cutid1
Chp 5 - 7 http://community.livejournal.com/hoodie_time/290740.html#cutid1
Epilogue http://community.livejournal.com/hoodie_time/290740.html#cutid1

[metallidean-grl.livejournal.com]

Very exciting. Can hardly wait to read. thanks.