Breathless

[dizzojay.livejournal.com]

Genre: Hurt/Comfort
Rating: K+
Word Count: approx 100

Best wishes for a wonderful birthday to Laedieduske who wanted a story where Dean's scrumptious tummy is star of the show.
Disclaimer: I don't own them, and those boys are mightily relieved!

 

xxxxx

Sam crouched alongside Dean, whispering frightened reassurances and cradling his rigid, grey-faced brother; watching helplessly as he gasped painfully for breath. The assault had come unexpectedly; the punch to the gut knocking the wind out of Dean with frightening force.

Gently rubbing Dean's clammy, abused abdomen, Sam felt trembling muscles clenching and flickering as he squirmed, gulping frantically, wild eyed with breathless panic. His belly convulsed under Sam's soothing touch, trying to force his paralysed lungs to do the job they momentarily couldn't.

Eventually, Dean's chest swelled, and he sucked in a deep, beautiful life-giving breath.

Sam wasn't sure who was more relieved.

xxxxx

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Comments

[tracys-dream.livejournal.com]

Just beautiful.

[dizzojay.livejournal.com]

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed.

[nightrider101.livejournal.com]

This was lovely.

[dizzojay.livejournal.com]

Thank you; glad you enjoyed.

[borgmama1of5.livejournal.com]

Nice!

[dizzojay.livejournal.com]

Hey there!
Glad you enjoyed :)

[jackfan2.livejournal.com]

So few words, such raw fear and emotion. Very nicely conveyed.

[dizzojay.livejournal.com]

Thank you; I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[lies-unfurl.livejournal.com]

Wonderful ficlet. It was hurt-y and sweet at the same time.

[dizzojay.livejournal.com]

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it.

[maypoles.livejournal.com]

I love Dean's tummy toooo. This was a perfect drabble.

[dizzojay.livejournal.com]

Heehee, who doesn't love dean's scrumptious tummy! Glad you enjoyed :)

[thruterryseyes.livejournal.com]

wahoo

[dizzojay.livejournal.com]

Hey there, I'm glad you enjoyed :)