ext_14911 ([identity profile] dawnintheforest.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] hoodie_time 2010-03-13 05:39 pm (UTC)

Aaawwww! <3
I really enjoyed this read. It was simple, sweet, angry/angsty, yet layered with far from simple issues. And I like your writing style too. For example, I really liked:

So it’s not going to happen like last time. Sam might be getting a little sick, but it’s just a cold. Nothing compared to last time. A few sniffles that Sam won’t let bother him. And it won’t bother Dean either, because Dean is back at the motel sleeping, and Sam can handle this situation perfectly fine on his own.

If only he weren’t tied up.

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